Category: Writers Block
The tears came, hot fast and with a keening cry as I fell to my knees in silent screaming prayer. My mind raced with the image of him, my dearest friend dead by his own hand. And the words poured from me. Dark haunted words revealing my heart yet hiding so very much more. His voice echoed in my mind, those long conversations where I'd laugh and he'd talk.
He batteled himself every day. Nights were the worst I suppose and I could do so very little to help him. and now, just hear him speak those words of self-pity and grief.
Time draws short and my breath comes now in shallow gasps as I read his final words to me. I fear for him, pray to God and all that is in Heaven that he will change his mind, listen to reason! "Please dear God, save him!" But there is nothing I can do now. Those long hours of comforting and consoling, all the nightmares and the fear, all were for nothing as he writes his final "Farewell."
That was an excellently written poem, a definite tear jerker. Is this your first poem? If so, it was marvelous!
no, I posted another, it was something about vengence or something like that this is my second poem. I'm glad you liked it.
Wonderful dark emotive stuff more...please..
it is a good poem. move on. hope can talk to you one of the day. smiles, season
I'm glad you like it. I guess it's nto hard to see what this is about ey? Well, I'll try ot write more soon. :)
Suicide?
yeah. How I felt when my friend was contemplating suicide.
Ouch! I can see this from both perspectives as I've both attempted and talked people out of suicide.Hope your friend is feeling more positive..
I liked this poem - very emotive and descriptively written. I hope your friend feels better. Keep writing.
in case yall didn't know, I, sometimes get on my friend's name, if there be thorns. so, sorry to confuse with the different names.
kayla, i hadn't read this one. i really like it. i have known people who have tried to kill themselves, and it made me feel so pointless and helpless. it's so well written. keep writing.